While Shiro does act mature for her age, some of the situations she was put in made me uncomfortable. I don't think I like Shiro as much as Sora, but that's mostly because I'm not into 11 year old children. Likewise, his little sister, Shiro, is an adorable and intelligent person. Sora is an interesting character, and though I feel like he sometimes strays into sue-dom, his general insanity shoves whatever perfection he might seem to have out of the window. I still like the anime more, but I didn't dislike the story told here. I don't know if it's due to the translations, or if it's because of the source content, but there were a lot of mistakes that would jerk me out of what was generally an immersive and enjoyable book.ĭisregarding the English itself, the story was fun. Basically, the writing in this volume was bad. There were formatting issues, random switches between past to present tense, random switches between first to third person without any indication that these were the thoughts of our characters, head hopping, spelling errors, punctuation errors, and incomplete sentences. I found more than just a few minor grammatical errors. There were a load of mistakes piled up to the ceiling. I regret to say that I am somewhat disappointed with this volume. After all, the anime is based off the novels, and I love reading more than watching. I loved the anime series, and I thought I would love the light novel series even more. I first picked this series up because the anime was awesome.
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